The Untouched World Of Mysteries #1

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Specifically, SuschnuhSuzu asked for this last time, I wasn't really wanting this to be my 100th deviation, but my Naruto drawing needs to take some time (don't worry, I am really working on it) so I shall just write a story about Manatoki.


In ancient times, when different worlds are being formed, there was one world that was untouched by the mankind(basically, a lot of worlds haven't been untouched yet. This world was one of them),in a fact so unreachable it was nearly impossible to step foot on this beautiful haven. The place was beautiful beyond words, and it was such an innocent place there was no one to rule or control this nameless world. A vast plain, sprouted millions of flowers, each a different kind. In the centre of everything, stood a big white carnation, glowing so brightly it touched the rays of the sun. Then, for once in a million years, it blossomed. The day of awaited moments had arrived.

A beautiful lass emerged from the bloom, as a flower crown appeared on her head. She opened up her eyes, her golden wheat-coloured hair framing her face. Her grass green eyes sparkled in the midst of glimpsing the sun, the vibrant colours of her clothes spun around gracefully like a perfect colour palette. Her fox ears and tail perched upright at attention, and she spun her head round, the beautiful locks of hair following her every single spin.

She saw, from atop the blue sky and white clouds, a wolf. A majestic, white wolf. Looking at her, She looked back at him.

The wolf stayed stiff, unable to move. It seemed paralyzed by this lass's beauty. 

Then, it slowly came down from the clouds, little steps conjured by little clouds forming at its feet. And the more closer it got to the ground, the more its body started to change.

And when it stepped foot to the plain alive with flowers, it wasn't a wolf anymore. It was a man. A young, handsome teenager, a golden crown dazzling above his head, an emblem at the left side of his coat which resembled a wolf on a cloud.

Then the teen opened his mouth and spoke, "Hello, lady."
"Hello. Where is this place?" the girl replied.
"Oh, this place doesn't really have a name, but we call it Manatoki." His voice was light and calm, but brought a deep tone.
"Ah, who are you?"
"I am Prince Clearsky, from the Cloud Realm, and I am a Cloud Wolf. I change the weather," he replies, taking a bow. “And what, my lady, may your name be?"
"I don't know my name, sorry, but what I do know, is that I am the Guardian of this field," she replied.
"Ah, guardian, hmm? Then can I name you?"
"Hmm, I'm fine with it. What name are you going to call me?"

The prince thought for a while. 

"Is Iyala fine with you?"
"Iyala?"
"It means 'lady of the wheat' in Manatokian."
"And why did you name me that?"
"Because...it matches the colour of your hair, right? I think its the most beautiful shade of wheat blonde I have ever seen." Clearsky gave a little cock to the side and smiling.
"Oh really? Thanks..." Iyala said as she brushed her hair to the side, trying to cover her blushing face.
"May I show you around?" He gave yet another bow, but even lower, and offering his hand.
"My pleasure." Iyala giggled as she took it, and Clearsky pulled her across the plain, laughing, and sharing stories together, and laying down at the plains, watching the galaxies.


"You know, about your fox tail, you can actually change into one?" One night when they were laying down at the plains together at sunset, Clearsky quoted.
"Really?!" Iyala gasped, "I didn't know!"
"No one told you." Clearsky chuckled.
"Let me try!" squealed Iyala happily, and after she said that, her form changed and turned into a beautiful orange fox with a flower shaped mark on her forehead.
"You look awesome." Clearsky quipped as he turned into a wolf.


Then, they'ed chase each other around the woods, and then stay in a cave for the night.

"Manatoki, is a world full of mythical beings that come in all kinds. And there are lots of realms too. Mine was included." Clearsky said.
"Ah, I wish I could go and explore the realms one day..." Iyala sighed dreamily, "With you!" She turned her head to Clearsky and smiled in the loveliest way that it made Clearsky speechless for a moment. "You will come with me, won't you?"
"Ah, of course I will, and then I will share more information about Manatoki with you~" grinned Clearsky.
"Thank you, you've been a very good friend to me." She said as she cuddled next to him, in the cave, under a beautiful starway.

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To be continued...
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Hahahaha..... I wanted to say the same like TsuchimikadoArima <3 IU LOVE THEM AS MUCH AS NARUHINA NOW blue heart bullet !

Hmmm.... Iyala x Clearsky / Clearsky x Iyala   - Hmmmmm....

ClearIya sounds bad. IyaClear even worse... SkyIya .... Ahem. No, better not - IyaSky - Lol, that sounds like the name of the sky is Iya......xD
Alright, next try~ 
Now that I think about it, ClearIya isn't that bad? I nearly sounds like an own name... Hm...
What do the others think? <3